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Once upon a time, my friend and I were hanging out in the street when we saw a cycling girl knocked down by a car.The girl’s left foot was bleeding seriously.It was obvious that she suffered much pain.

  I applied pressure to the wound to stop the bleeding while my friend called an ambulance.I gave the girl all the first aid I know.Fortunately, the girl wasn’t severely injured.She thanked us a lot.

From this experience, not only do we know the importance of first aid knowledge but also we acquire the delight of helping others.We all feel proud of ourselves.

书面表达评分细则

1、本题总分为20分, 按5个档次给分.

2、评分时, 先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次, 然后以该档次的要求来衡量, 确定或调整档次, 最后给分.

3、词数少于90和多于120的, 从总分中减去2分.

4、评分时, 应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性, 根据表达内容的层次适当分段及语言的得体性.

5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面.评分时, 应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑.英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受.

6、如书写较差, 以至影响交际, 将分数降低一个档次.

各档次的给分范围和要求

0分:信息未能传达给读者.

第一档:(1—5分):未完成试题规定的任务.

第二档:(6—9分):能表达观点, 但不够充分, 很少句子可读, 未恰当完成试题规定的任务.

第三档:(10—12分):能表达观点, 但欠充分, 语言错误较多, 基本完成了试题规定的任务.

第四档:(13—16分):观点观确, 陈述合理, 有部分语言错误, 较好地完成了试题规定的任务.

第五档:(17—20分):观点观确, 陈述合理, 极少语言错误, 很好地完成了试题规定的任务.

创建者: 绩优堂 贡献者: 绩优堂
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Dear Jack

You asked me in your letter how people in China celebrate National Day.Let me tell you.

National Day is such an important festival for Chinese people that it is observed all over the country.The streets take on a clear look.Big stores are hanging up national flags and you can even see national flags on some taxis and private cars.

All TV stations are bringing entertaining programs about National Day,while ordinary communities create all kinds of activities in celebration of it,for example,Yangge Dance.

People can take leisure holiday during National Day.They may go on a tour,or even travel abroad;they may also spend the holiday at home with their families.

In China,National Day is a happy time for all the people.

Yours,

Li Hua

创建者: 绩优堂 贡献者: 绩优堂
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Dear Mr Thomas,

Happy birthday, Mr Thomas!  I have planned to attend your birthday party to present my best wishes to you.However,I am too busy to get away.My grandmother,who is eighty-two years old,has come to visit us.We haven’t seen each other for a long time,so we are preparing for a family dinner to receive her.There will be a family talk after the meal.

You have been with us for two years,away from your family,working on your voluntary project.How I wish I could be at the party.singing the Happy Birthday to You song with other students.I have got your birthday present ready for you.But I can give it to you next time I see you before class.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

创建者: 绩优堂 贡献者: 绩优堂
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Dear Editor,

We have had a discussion recently about “High School Students and Cyber Games”.Here is the result of the discussion.

The supporters,who are interested in playing cyber games themselves say, that the games have a lot of benefits, including developing intelligence,making them feel relaxed and even helping them learn more effectively.That’s why they hold the idea that high school students can play cyber games.

However,the opposite group thinks that it is a waste of time to play cyber games.People can easily become addicted to the cyber games,which are often considered as cyber poison.

In my opinion,I am strongly against playing cyber games.We should fix our attention on our studies.We need relaxation,but have other ways,like sports and music.It is best that we keep away from the time-wasting cyber games.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

创建者: 绩优堂 贡献者: 绩优堂
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    Hello! Everyone.My topic today is“Confidence”.

Whether you know it or not,confidence exists in your life and plays an important role in your study as well as in your growth.We often hear someone say he is afraid of doing something.He might be able to do it,but he is not confident of himself.

To build up your confidence,first you had better take part in as many sports activities as possible.Sports and games expose yourself to many occasions where you can find yourself able to do a lot of things.Another way is to work together with your classmates,who can help you solve many problems.It is participation in class that gives you chances to build up confidence.

Only by trying hard and not fearing failure can you become a confident man.

Thanks for listening!

创建者: 绩优堂 贡献者: 绩优堂
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       Taking part in after-class activities is of great importance to us young students.

On the one hand,it helps us develop confidence in ourselves,without which we often feel afraid of speaking in public and we will miss many opportunities.On the other hand,after-class activities build up our skills in communication with people.Most importantly,after-class activities serve as society,there being chances for us to learn management or the solutions of problems.

Unfortunately,some of the students consider after-class activities a waste of time,because they only see the activities take some time.But they haven’t seen the benefits they can get from  attending the activities.We should know that after-class activities do more good than we think.

创建者: 绩优堂 贡献者: 绩优堂
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      It is a common sight to see many young people engaged in emailing,twittering or chatting using their smartphones.It might be the best choice to kill time when they are on dull journey.

They are called Smartphone Addicts,who are buried in using their smartphones or laptops without raising their heads.This is very harmful.On the one hand,they keep away from their friends or family.On the other hand,being busy with their smartphones can cause accidents,which brings them more pains than pleasure.

As a matter of fact,they can take up reading to kill the time during their trips.Reading books or newspapers can also enrich their knowledge.The pleasure from reading is a pleasant experience they can’t have from using smartphones.

创建者: 绩优堂 贡献者: 绩优堂
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      A school boy became known throughout the country overnight.It wasn’t his talent or bravery that brought him fame but his trip to Egypt,where he scribbled on a statue in an old temple,exposed him to the public criticism.

Most people said the boy’s scribble represents a lot of tourists,who often write their names wherever they travel.The ugly scribbles make the scenic spot dirty and become a sort of pollution.There are also some people blaming the school education,which does nothing to prevent people from doing such foolish things.

The boy’s mistake once again reminds people of respecting history and preserving cultural relics.When we travel,we should learn to admire historic spots.Any form of touching is doing damage to these cultural relics.

创建者: 绩优堂 贡献者: 绩优堂
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        Community work does much good to the development of the youngsters.By taking part in these social activities, we can increase the sense of responsibility,knowing what we should do to better the environment.Being engaged in community work,we can understand social life better,preparing ourselves for the life in the future.In the meantime,through community work,we can learn how to cope with each other or to do the work more effectively,which is a necessary quality for future life.As you can see,doing community work benefits us a lot.We will learn a lot from social practice, which we can’t learn in the classroom.If there is a community work project,wouldn’t you join us enthusiastically?
创建者: 绩优堂 贡献者: 绩优堂
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Study Effectively

Students of Senior Three have more subjects to review,which brings them much pressure.Therefore,it is very important to study effectively.

First of all,learn in a relaxing way with a peaceful but merry mindset.This will remove the pressure from us,making study an easy job.Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports.Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and to fresh our mind,making us memorize things faster and longer.Music,too,is another effective means of refreshing the mind and helping us concentrate better.

Last but not least,we should exchange ideas with our classmates.Through the communication we can find support,which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study.

创建者: 绩优堂 贡献者: 绩优堂
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Dear John,

Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening.Unfortunately,it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family,because I will be fully occupied then for an important exam coming the day after tomorrow.I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of such a happy get-together,and I hope that all of you enjoy a good time.Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting afterward? If so, please don’t hesitate to drop me a line about your preferable date.I do long for a pleasant chat with you.

Please allow me to say sorry again.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

创建者: 绩优堂 贡献者: 绩优堂
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    Can money buy happiness?Various people have various answers.

Some people think that money is the source of happiness.With money one can buy whatever he enjoys.With money,one can do whatever he likes.So,in their minds money can bring comfort,security,and so on.Money,as they think,is the source of happiness.

But there are still a lot of others who think that money is the root of all evil.Money drives people to steal,to rob,and to break the law.A lot of people became criminals just because they were in search of money.

I think that money is essential to life and we cannot manage without money.But even though money is necessary to life,it can’t buy happiness.Happiness is not something that can be measured by money.It is a state of mind.One can have plenty of money,with which he can buy whatever he wants, but at the same time he is not happy because he is never satisfied or he is troubled by various kinds of problems.Therefore,although money is necessary for a happy life,it can’t buy happiness.

创建者: 绩优堂 贡献者: 绩优堂
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It is well-known that we live in a dynamic world with various difficulties.When we are faced with them nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence.With confidence, we can find sometimes the problem is not as big as we imagine.

Take most of us for example,the entrance exam to college seems to be a horrible monster.Accordingly,some people give up,but some persist.In my eyes,with confidence,right assessment of the difficulties,as well as full preparation, we will overcome all problems and challenges.On the whole,I believe we youngsters should face the difficulties in a right manner.Nothing is impossible and just do it!

创建者: 绩优堂 贡献者: 绩优堂
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Being passionate,honest and hard-working,a good student is always listening and learning.Personally speaking, I strongly believe that honesty is of utmost importance among dozens of good qualities.

There is a proverb that goes“Honesty is the best policy”,and it seems as true as it was when first coined.The most important element in human relationships,whether business or personal,is trust.

Here is one of my secrets.I once lied to my parents because of my poor scores.Not having known the real fact from my teachers,they praised and encouraged me,showing their deep love.Later days,my conscience swallowed me.I gave it up, and chose to be frank.Wow!It is better to stick to the truth!

From then on,I have kept the following in mind:If it is not true, don’t say it.If it is not right,don’t do it.Honesty is not only the best policy,but also a principle,which is absolutely essential for the good and happy living.

创建者: 绩优堂 贡献者: 绩优堂
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    This morning when I read the newspaper,a piece of news attracted my attention.It said that when seeing an old man fall off his bike,a kind-hearted car driver pulled up and helped him to his feet.However,the old man insisted that the driver had knocked him down and asked for some money for treatment of the disease,which upset the driver much.Fortunately,a passer-by happened to photograph everything with his mobile phone.Therefore,the driver was not wronged at last.

I felt affected after reading the news.How come a man has to face the risk of being deliberately harmed by the person he offers help to? If this is the price of helping others,I think few would dare to do any good deed.I hope that things of this kind will not happen again forever.

创建者: 绩优堂 贡献者: 绩优堂

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